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Many cities have vehicle-free days, when people are required or encouraged to take a bus, bicycle or travel by taxi. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? With the passengers on one track increasing significantly, this might cause those workers miss their bus and cannot be punctual eventually. ※ 形近词区分，track什么意思呢？是想用truck替换题目中的公交？还是想表示waiting in line的乘客多？措辞不清就难免让读者费解。
※ this might cause就多余了，with结构本身就可以表“原因”。
※ 因果关系固然常用，但一定不能随便写，逻辑通顺与否需要好好考量。 With more bus passengers on car-free days, public vehicles will be overloaded, and this will reduce ride comfort. 解析： ※ 调整了原句的因与果，调整后的三环因果解决了理解障碍。
※ 伴随状语部分加入on car-free days，是为了更扣住题干关键词，强调这几天的乘客人数会激增。
※ 还是保留了原有的平行结构，两个独立句子的平行，逻辑上也有递进关系。
小总结： 当考生有能力铺设暗线的因果关系时，要注意不要在明面上再重复一遍。
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