支招雅思写作小作文（76） | 地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变。-雅思

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支招雅思写作小作文（76） | 地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变。

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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由老师团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。

【类型】地图（非数据型图表）

【细分】改建（removal、replacements、additions）

【写作视角】“上帝视角”。注意：题图题的主体部分有三种视角（对应三种写作思路）：1）上帝视角（即俯视，当成平面图写）；2）访客视角（即进入建筑或场地内部，以访客视线，按照线路图写）；3）混合视角（即前两种视角混合着用）。老章不常用纯粹的上帝视角写，这一篇从而值得注意学习这种视角的写法。

# Introduction

The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility will have greater versatility.

开头段，固定操作。说明图的主题，以及描述变化后的突出特点。

# Body

The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain the way they are.

主体部分第1段：按照图中箭头的指向，先描述一进门的区域的变化，从变化比较大的部分开始，进而写到变化小或者没有变化的部分。

Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room – adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.

主体部分第2段：视线转向至东西方向的区域。与上一段的思路相同，先写变化大的地方后写变化小的地方。注意：需要通过一些连接词向考官展示写作的逻辑顺序。

# Conclusion

With the planned changes, the sports center will be more multi-functional.

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